Writing reflection

Sometimes I may notice that I tend to use the word I too many times. I also notice that in my writing, I am okay with starting sentences in different ways. But there may be times when I think that I really like one way of starting a sentence and I get carried away with it.
So far I have changed by using longer and more descriptive words. I usually get them from my vocabulary words. I also include more details from time to time. That makes me have to get deeper into my writing and really try to remember that one time.
In writing, I think I am good at using more descriptive words. With the help of the vocabulary words, I can use better words and it feels good to. I also think I am good at brainstorming ideas. As I go along and am publishing piece of writing, I can come up with a better idea and usually will change it.
As a writer, I would like to work on leads and endings. Sometimes my endings just make the story end like that but I want it to have more meaning to it. My leads don't really seem to hook the reader into the story. I think I will try to add more action into my beginnings.
My favorite piece I have written is Citi Field. I just recently finished it and I love all the descriptive words in it. I also love the details and Citi Field is one of my favorite places. I was at a professional baseball game at the time and it was really fun. I find it fun to read it.

Math

I liked playing factor captor because there are so many things that are hidden and you really have to think to get them right. I also like you are allowed to take your time to think about what to do. It gets really fun if it is a close game and also harder.Making an array can help because you can make all the different arrays for a number and wallah you get the factors.

I liked math page 7 because it was about fact families and we got to make our own. I also liked doing the addition and subtraction. I found it interesting seeing how much you can do with 3 numbers. It is fun creating my own fact family instead of doing the one that they gave us.

My math

In math we have learned about prime numbers, prime factorizations and arrays. They are good math subjects to learn about and can help you a lot in math. They have been interesting to me so it is easy for me to focus on my work. They have games to go along with them so it makes them fun. I do not do well with explaining. I learn better with somebody showing me and telling me. That is how I get the idea of it. Otherwise, I might not really get it. If I'm doing a hard problem solving question and it is not quiet, then sometimes I might forget all the information in the question. It needs to be easier to focus in math for me than any other subject.